Friday, March 23, 2012

Show not tell table tennis


Carefully I aimed the ping pong ball over the net to my opponent, who then returned the shot back to me. It was like a rally. When all of a sudden my opponent tried to do an ace but she over shot the table. “Yeah. 1-0” I cheered.
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  1. JarnaApril 2, 2012 at 8:58 AM

    Hi Ashleigh,

    I really think your post was good, but I think you didn't really tell me that you were playing table tennis. Besides that it was excellent.

    Your Sincerely Jarna

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